Rated 4.80/5 based on 10 reviews
Tomb is the first story in the 14 book McLaughlin City Series. A colorful cast of explorers with unique talents and abilities are sent to explore King Foymama's tomb, a tomb that was sealed in time. Once the tomb has been revealed, nothing is as it seems. Expect the unexpected as the tomb protects itself from intruders.
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  • Category: Fiction » Adventure » Action
  • Words: 21,110
  • Language: English
  • ISBN: 9781105480218
About B.A. Savage

Update: **Until Smashwords takes care of the issue, I letting the fans of my books know that Chatter E (the person who did the last review) is an former disgruntled employee who only took the time to give the book a bad review AFTER he was let go. I have assembled a team of voice actors who will turn this book into an audio book, making it one of a kind. He is an 18 year old who is upset because he is no longer part of those plans due to his own 'limited reading skills' as he consistent misreads and misunderstood correspondences from our office. The reviews for the book, mostly are several years old, and since we just started taking up the voicing of the book in November, none are by employees and truth be one is from a person I knew when I first published this back in 2012, that person is now my wife.**

I plan on writing 30+ books, but I need help from you, the readers. Motivation is a tool that I lack. Creativity is a resource where "my cup" runneth over. So, please, if you have anything positive to say, polite criticism to give, or you simply want to say hi, feel free to. And remember, a review can be a detailed essay or a simple "I loved it".

I havent rec'd as much feedback as i would liked BUT the sheer number of total series downloads has been encouraging. A few more positive reviews and i will release the next in the series Century. Thank you to all who have supported me.

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Review by: John Spencer on Nov. 30, 2013 :
Not bad but flipping between 1st and 3rd person didn't help.
Story was ok.
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Review by: Virginia Conlin on March 17, 2013 :
Terrific book! Fast paced action.
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Review by: M Johns on Dec. 22, 2012 :
I love this series. One of the best I've found on smashwords.
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Review by: Danielle Stephens on Nov. 15, 2012 :
Loved it! Shadow is kind of badass!!!
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Review by: Lissa Maiden on Nov. 14, 2012 :
I couldn't put it down! Intense and thrilling... can't wait to read the next book.
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Review by: Teresa Simmons on Nov. 14, 2012 :
This book is so great... I love the interaction between the characters. Makes me interested in more similar stories.
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Review by: Marilyn Page on Jan. 30, 2012 :
Read this in 2 days, and already half way through the second book. I loved the room with the "incense" haha
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Review by: Lucas McCowan, Jr on Jan. 30, 2012 :
Good Book
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Review by: Lucas McCowan, Jr on Jan. 30, 2012 : (no rating)
Good book.
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Review by: Rocky Maiva on Jan. 30, 2012 :
Solid book, loved how the twins ummm....left the story lol..i dont want to spoil it but it was a solid effort. I read both books so far and gonna do a review on that one now, its a good read too. Looking forward to the third book of the serious. Maybe you can tell us what its gonna be about? Introducing a new character? Or more backstory on some of these characters? can't wait :)
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Review by: Teresa Simmons on Jan. 29, 2012 :
What a fun and interesting book... you never knew what was going to happen next! I love the variety of personalities in the characters... I am looking forward to the next book!
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