on Sep. 14, 2012 :
An intriguing summary...but does have serious grammar problems from the start, and frankly, that put me off it.
A lot of it misspelt words, because the author clearly meant one word, but used a homophone that was completely incorrect.
It was mentioned at the beginning that someone did proofread and edit this work, but...it honestly does not seem like that to me, because bad spelling and grammar haunt this piece, unfortunately, even to the very last line.
I can't give this any stars, but I would be interested in reading it again once the author corrects or re-releases this work with spelling and grammar given a serious overhaul.
(review of free book)