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on June 03, 2013 :
Good story line. The autor really has done a good job of setting the story and developing the charactors. The only critism I have is the technology terminology is wanting. Sometime I think the autor has never written steampunk before, but I guess I'm just nit picking.
Don't let it stop you reading this story. It is otherwise a good read, and unlike some erotica it's not just smut with no story line - Not that there is anything wrong with smut with no story line. But sometimes it's nice to read an erotic story with a plot.
I think now I will have to read the autor's other works.
(reviewed within a month of purchase)