Princess Of Power - Castle Queen - Lost Souls - A New Beginning
My imaginative short stories do not reflect the person I am. I am not by any means a professional writer. I write for the joy of it. So yes, there may be tons of grammatical errors.
I have been working on the fourth and final installment to this series. It is titled "A New Beginning" and it is now published! I believe it is the best in the series and slightly over 20,000 words.
I hope when you read my stories, you can connect with the characters and envision the scenes in your mind. My short stories are for entertainment only.
Thank you for reading.
on Dec. 17, 2012 :
There are several inconsistent threads that are woven through this tale. In the first story ‘Princess of Power’ we are told that “Other than being raped by a Runaway, she (Simone) has never been intimate with anyone.” But now we are told she had a loving husband and was pregnant with his child when she entered the valley.
Also, I wonder who could nurse the newborn Kayla during the time Monet was traipsing around the Galapagos Islands. And speaking of the islands, how could one island be so much different than the one containing the valley?
I am glad this tale has come to an end. The writing is too stilted to wade through any more.
(review of free book)