on Feb. 6, 2016 :
This story has lots of potential. The author put me on the beach in Cape May, and had me right along with the kids when they fell into a hole and found something unexpected. If revised with streamlined dialog and sharper descriptions, this story would be 5-stars for sure.
(review of free book)
on March 16, 2012 :
This story is great! I love it! Short, but also packed with all the elements of a longer story!