on Oct. 06, 2012 :
A very quick read. The erotica is quick, to the point, and fairly interesting. The concept of the story is sexy and the way it comes together leads to a highly sexual climax.
However, the writing is very quick and dirty with very little buildup. The sex itself is very fast, and the level of detail written into it is minute. Much like good sex needing foreplay, this story could have benefited from more description and a draw out of the action itself.
However, despite this, the story is an effective fap-fiction and if you are looking for something to just get you off, this would be a good one to get.
(reviewed within a month of purchase)