on Sep. 6, 2012 :
I really enjoyed this tale. One of the few left on Smashwords where it's not pseudo-incest but rather full on incest. Yes, no actual penetration occurs, but that doesn't detract from the hotness of the tale. In fact, it enhances it.
Beyond a couple grammar errors, Jay has written something that flows really well from scene to scene. I highly recommend this to anyone who enjoys this kind of fiction.
(reviewed the day of purchase)