Bought it, read it, ate it up like a potato chip.
It's really too short. The author is short changing her ideas by not giving them a proper canvas to display them. The price is what I would expect of a novel, not a short story. Still, the idea was compelling enough I had to check this out to see how good it was.
It's well written for what it is, but far far to short. Expand this by about 200 pages detailing the lead up, maybe bits on the war and how each of the protagonists came to be who they are and you have a five star novel here. Alternatively cut down the price and you have a five star quickie that'd be great in any erotica anthology.
To the author: Please take this as a compliment. I would love to see some much longer works from you.
(reviewed the day of purchase)