Starting Over

Rated 4.50/5 based on 4 reviews
For most of the passengers it's just an ordinary flight but for two of them it will be a flight that changes their lives forever. For him it may mean heartbreak. Can he pick up the pieces and start again? For her it may be a ticket to a new life. Will she destroy anothers dreams to get what she wants?
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Words: 3,420
Language: English

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Review by: KaraSkinner on Feb. 20, 2018 :
The beginning of this story was difficult to get into. Its poor formatting and lack of editing was frustrating. Everything is dialogue until page 3, when the author finally bothers to tell us they're on an airplane.

I did read it on the Smashwords reader which might have something to do with the formatting, though.

But the story gradually gets better. Flashbacks show the characters during happier times and the author writes beautiful descriptions, even though there's not enough of them to immerse the reader fully into the story.

The story shifts from flashback to present, from inner dialogue to action very well. I never felt bogged down in description, nor did I get impatient for a flashback to end, which I do with a lot of stories.

But the story ends abruptly, and while the main character gets closure, the reader certainly doesn't. So while this story has a few redeeming qualities, overall it is an amateurish work from someone who could be a great writer with a lot more time and practice.
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Review by: L.A Speedwing on April 28, 2012 :
Is there a good way to break up with someone? Not really but there's definitely a way to write about it and that's what this author was able to achieve in this story. We live this break up with the protagonist.
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Review by: Evangeline Love on April 14, 2012 :
Very well written.
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Review by: Jane Clayton on April 13, 2012 :
What a great story! Nice and tight. Did not know what to expect. Satisfying ending.
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