Hamster Horror

Rated 1.00/5 based on 4 reviews
Toxic spill is only the beginning of the horrors to come.
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Review by: Michael Carter on Oct. 13, 2012 :
Ths seemed to have promise at first, and was like a very compact Anmal-On-The-Rampage novel, but suddenly became very bad, both writing-wise and story-wise. The final paragraph was just nonsensical and gave the impression the author was just sick of the story, but published it anyway, without even correcting the errors. Oh well!
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Review by: Artie Margrave on April 15, 2012 :
At least the author's got reviews. Something many of us are dying for. It's a short story but i was pretty disappointed with its organisation. Punctuation was very bad. Hopefully you'll learn from this.
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Review by: vix kirkpatrick on April 15, 2012 :
I really liked the start of this exceptionally short story! but then it felt like the author came home after a night on the piddlejuice and finished it... poor grammar, bad spelling, you name it!!
and it finished so suddenly!!
what a shame... thought this could have been really good with a comedy slant.
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Review by: Jane Doilly on April 15, 2012 :
If you like poor grammar, inadequate punctuation and a poor plot then this is the story for you. Oh, and it isn't laid out as a proper e-book.
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