On The Gathering Storm

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Years after falling down a dirt shaft as a little girl, 29-year old Hannah Garretty is snatched from her bohemian life on the island and vanishes into a forest lair where unspeakable things have happened. Clinging to her raw memories, she tries to maintain hope and sanity, biding her time with a desperate need to survive.

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About Jason McIntyre

Born on the prairies, Jason McIntyre eventually lived and worked on Vancouver Island where the vibrant characters and vivid surroundings stayed with him and coalesced into what would become his novel, On The Gathering Storm. Before his time as an editor, writer and communications professional, he spent several years as a graphic designer and commercial artist. Jason is the author of more than two dozen short stories, several novellas and full-length fiction.

Currently, Jason is at work on new novels and stories in the Dovetail Cove world -- companion books to BLED and SHED.

His latest full-length novel, THE DEVIL'S RIGHT HAND, is out now!


The saga began with The Night Walk Men, the #1 Kindle Suspense novella by Jason McIntyre. Now it continues with The Devil's Right Hand. And a war is brewing.

Meet Benton Garamond. He's lost. He careens through the wet streets of downtown Vancouver on a collision course with a dirty lawyer named Levy Gillis. He wants something from Gillis and he aims to get it.

Meet Donovan Lo, former drug kingpin and not bad with the ladies if you ask him. He's in hiding and has a plan to leave his empire for good. But something -- and someone -- aims to put a bullet through his last big score.

Now meet Sperro. He has a lot to say about his job, about Benton Garamond and about Donovan Lo. Sperro will be your tour guide.

"We are Night Walk Men, imbued with the lives of at least ten men, and we walk among you like a blur, unseen but often sensed or smelled like pollen in the air when you can't see flowers--or the tingle you get when the hairs on your neck stand up.

"If you hear footsteps on the parched earth behind you, or if dry autumn leaves scrape concrete with a breeze, that's most likely one of us, walking just a little ahead or just a little behind. If it's dark and you climb into your car and for once--for no reason at all--wonder why you didn't check the back seat for strangers, one of my brothers is mostly likely back there as you drive off.

"We are everywhere at once and nothing can stop us. We are Death incarnate, walking under long robes of black and chasing down the winds to read from a discourse that may be the last words you'll hear..."

Be prepared to shake The Devil's Right Hand.

Learn more about Jason McIntyre


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Jason McIntyre's debut novel, On The Gathering Storm, is a story of fear, redemption, loss and consumerism. But it's also a parable on the persistence of hope. At 29, Hannah Garretty is pursuing her lifelong dream of being a paid photographer. But in a curl of circumstance, she's snatched from her bohemian life on the island and vanishes into a forest lair where unspeakable things have happened.

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J. Alexander Greenwood reviewed on on April 17, 2011

Jason McIntyre possesses the most rare of gifts: the guts to open himself up completely combined with the ability to get it on the page. "On the Gathering Storm" fearlessly engages the reader with lush depictions of acts of cruelty, daily life and yes, horror. Perhaps most interesting, however, are the vulnerabilities of the characters--fully on view and intertwined with their determination to survive the trap in which they've been ensnared. I won't make the easy comparison to other great thriller writers--McIntyre's his own writer, one I'm delighted to read.
(reviewed 5 months after purchase)
Rachel Whitley reviewed on on March 9, 2011

Horrific, intense, magnetic!

'On the Gathering Storm' is an all-too-real tale of terror, abduction, and one woman's will to survive. Jason Mcintyre's portrayal of Hannah Garretty is so compelling, that it's impossible to stop reading her story, even as the horrific scenes made me wish I'd never opened the book. Hannah becomes a real person, not just a character in a novel, and it's this facet of Mcintyre's craftsmanship that kept me turning the pages.

The first few chapters seem a bit slow and overly detailed, but as the story progresses, those earlier paragraphs crystalize into a picture of Hannah's mindset and motivations. During her imprisonment, Hannah's narrative, in the form of stream-of-consciousness, is unsettling, because it's all too easy to imagine oneself in that situation. I don't want to give away any of the plot, but the ending of the novel is startling! It turned a predictable plot, into something unforgettable.

'On the Gathering Storm' is not for readers who are disturbed by graphic violence. Otherwise, this book is for anyone who loves characters that become real people in the space of a novel, psychological suspense, and surprise endings.
(reviewed 2 days after purchase)
Ann Mauren reviewed on on Dec. 18, 2010

At first glance, Hannah Garretty seems like a girl who’s got it all: she’s a head-turning beauty with a good job, great friends, and a particularly talented eye for photography. But there’s a flip side: she’s also got a crowded closet full of skeletons from her past and a frightening precognitive ability that fills her mind with a quick still frame-style glimpse of something yet to happen.

It’s one of these ‘Grasps’ that sets her on a path to save a young woman from terrible danger. Instead, she finds herself trapped in the middle of unspeakable horror. With so many demons in her past wearing her down, can she find the strength and will to face the one who holds her now?

This dark and chilling tale by Jason McIntyre marks his debut into the world of suspense novels, but you’d never guess that because his story plays in your mind like one told by a master of the craft. With a unique blend of beautiful, richly descriptive language and bursts of dynamic, realistic streams of thought from the heroine, McIntyre’s writing style had me gripped by the throat from the get go. Shifting seamlessly between her present, her past, and her visions of the future, the powerful subject matter is sometimes deeply disturbing but always riveting. Just like a real rainstorm, this story gets very dark as it builds with frightening intensity and booms and flashes in your mind. As the action comes to a head, themes of hope, endurance and courage shine like beams of light through scattering clouds once the storm begins to pass and the story winds down. It’s a wild, brutal, scary ride, but very satisfying after the air has cleared.

If you enjoy the power of a psychological tempest, ‘On The Gathering Storm’ was written for you.
(reviewed 12 days after purchase)
Joel Kirkpatrick reviewed on on Dec. 10, 2010

Few things in life cannot be labeled; called by some alternate name, pasted to the thing with lazy affection. Guys name their cars – and rarely share them – women name each other as quietly, depending on what was being worn in public that day when the namee passed. We do it for fun. Jason McIntyre has turned it into an art form. Everything in ‘On the Gathering Storm’ is labeled. You realize when you get your mind around it; it is how his MC – Hannah - experiences her world. Right away we meet Mr. Mean Man, Unwashed Hair Girl, Bumper-Grinder – who soon becomes just Bumper.

This text seems so new to me, it’s like I’ve read nothing like it before, and I know I have. Bright, descriptive text is taught…everywhere. Readers hope and pray the next book they select will contain it. But, Jason is writing with neon colors, and they flicker at first, as neon does when it resists life with halts and blasts. When it settles, and you’ve really begun to hear the energy, the whole damned thing glows like nothing nearby. This book doesn’t pulse like the one, weak sign on the beer joint you pass each day, and never sit inside. Jason’s book glows like the entire flashing city strip you travel. Everywhere your eyes wander, your brain tells you to stop and go in. He uses single words as these lit things; capitalized as he desires, words as punctuation.

A standout sentence: ‘In. Out. In. Out.’

Even when Jason quotes (sings) lines of a familiar tune, the prose is changed to light, and shows you something more of where you are… Billy Boy. When others speak to Hannah, as if they’d become her own conscience, they are only trying to pierce all the other colors to reach her. These oddly illuminated words are flashes in Hannah’s mind, and she must soon grab at each neon-defined flash of sanity. While you were reading within the bursts of her thoughts, seeing and sensing her life in posed vignettes that only spring singly out of all the color when she passes…she has been drawn by one laser-like color, into hell. You could see it reflected out of her eyes, but you didn’t want to look directly at it. She had no choice, compelled by its Grasp. But, you are numb now, as Hannah is, drugged by light, and trapped.

What was in those words? What was in those pills? “Remember. The light was - ”

The dead numbness in your fingers, the overload of sensations in your thoughts, are not the veils of a heavily sweetened generic text; the sort of which you buy in the market paperbacks, or the cigarette-style shelves of your mall bookstore, but with labels that tell you nothing of the substances. You remember - this is something altogether too different- dispensed by the white lab coat, under light that hurts your eyes, and lab coat’s words were muted when lab coat seemed to wonder if you understood whether this mixture is right for you. The container he offered you seemed small, but he smiled; there is only one ingredient in this text and you are still experiencing the hyper-reality he, and it, caused. You’ve taken a full dose of undiluted Hipsoloquia Narrateglamorex. It shines so bright in your mind - Hannah’s mind - that it hurts, and every searing page will become a photograph in your memory.
(reviewed the day of purchase)
Darcia Helle reviewed on on Nov. 17, 2010

Brutal. Disturbing. Engaging. Gripping. Moving. This book kept me up all night. First, because I had to finish it. Then because I couldn't shake it off.

Jason McIntyre doesn't tell a story. He steps out of the way and allows his characters to bring you in their world. Use caution when reading this one, however, as the characters might not allow you back out.
(reviewed 3 days after purchase)
Jenifer Avery reviewed on on Nov. 16, 2010

EZ Read Staff Review:

Jason McIntyre has something of a large indie following on sites like Smashwords and Goodreads, both of which I prowl regularly. There’s something romantic about a cult following for an independent author in a publishing world always aiming for the next popcorn blockbuster movie deal. Sometimes “big” books seem like extended scripts, and more work lacks the kind of writing that doesn’t transfer onto the big screen. Fight the power! I chose “On the Gathering Storm” because as McIntyre’s debut, it’s also his most popular. Let’s just say I’m not ready to crawl back under The (Publishing) Man’s thumb just yet.

“On the Gathering Storm” is a gritty tale of survival for our heroine Hannah, who walks a fine line between sanity and insanity throughout. While the main portion of the narrative is a survival and captivity tale, we sink deep into Hannah’s mind and memories as she explores her past life and her development. It’s a dark and somewhat empowering story to read about Hannah, who may outwardly seem like the victim, but is inwardly a champion. It also says something about the victimization of women; challenging the assumption that they don’t have strength to overcome, to protect themselves. This book is violent, but challenging. It never feels like violence for the sake of it, which I think makes the harder parts more palatable. The nail-biting parts are still rough. I have two ulcers now, one named “Dexter” and one named “On the Gathering Storm”.

McIntyre, from a snooty-writerly-standpoint, has incredible style. His dark voice doesn’t just end when it’s convenient; he takes us on an inner journey with Hannah because it’s truthful to how her brain works. It’s as distinct and raw of a writer as I’ve read in a long time. It’s so easy for major label editors to take a writer’s voice and dice it into tidy bestseller blandness. It’s the same kind of “fancy” tone that litters the “New Yorker”, making everyone sound like the same writer. McIntyre isn’t afraid to “inconvenience” his readers with style, which makes the book stand out, and impressed me a ton.

A must read, but not for the faint of heart.
(reviewed the day of purchase)
Susan Haight reviewed on on Nov. 10, 2010

Startling! Recommended!
(reviewed 37 days after purchase)
Alicia Torrence reviewed on on Oct. 25, 2010

There is so much depth to this story and Hannah is like a real person with all the foibles and hopes and fears that many of us might have. I really liked this book and you will too. It's cheaper than a Starbucks and you'll have the memories of reading this woman's story long after the coffee cup has started to dust.
(reviewed 9 days after purchase)
Yngve Inntjore Levinsen reviewed on on Oct. 20, 2010

I found the first half of the book to be jumping a bit too much here and there, without much purpose (very subjective statement this..). The second half definitely catches up and brings this into a exciting and thrilling story. All in all well worth the price, and worth reading!
(reviewed 21 days after purchase)
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