This does not review, final comparison. Next note put in translation done work you bought, but it serves to see how change has made work.
Note: There was a draft version tf lab Tf (post called 500 word or less), unfortunately it was lost before you translated not include it:
In the current version, it fixes some problem, such as the intervention queen fary that comes out of nowhere, almost being a doex machina (by misfortunes aregla by means of elimination his intervention and development of this), close satisfactory form mezo arch, detino of the characters left on the air. I would have liked recovered the scene from the end of the doctor, a hundred better follow-up to the secondary conflito of the characters and made it clearer than Dave even under lycanthropy curse. It was more satisfying because so open the current not really conclusive anything.
By misfortunes current verion retains failure despite a more satisfactory conclusion with Mezo, Dave still has no real closure, final sex scene if he only says nothing, there is no follow-up to the character like that potion. Version lycanthropy issue of dave side very fast and follow up thing if they do last verdict. Not to mention passing focus Dave Maso very quickly is more subjective.
Personally I can not get a new version that is lower than the previous one, I have a crossed feeling I thought final pairs more than LAB TF law, THAT IS WHY I BUYED IT ORIGINALLY.
(reviewed 2 years after purchase)