Paradise in the Forest

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A truly heart-warming short story detailing the life of Friend, the wisest of sun harvesters, and her struggle to understand love, life and Paradise. This tale will leave you soul searching and questioning your own views about what it truly means to exist.
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Words: 3,810
Language: English
ISBN: 9781476386904
About Jessica Cambrook

I'm Jessica, nineteen from England.

Self-confessed tea & sushi addict. I love writing, reading, music, photography, art, films and reviews.

I've just finished a Creative Writing course and I'm going back to study English at college part-time in September.

Writing is the one thing I won't give up on! My biggest dream (since the age of five with my first ever story entitled 'The Skeleton with the Spot') has always been to become a successful author. Any feedback you can give is invaluable!


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Review by: Francis W. Porretto on July 11, 2012 :
Okay, so it reads a little like a Creative-Writing class exercise. So what? It's pretty, imaginative, even a trifle poignant. I liked it quite a lot.

You made only one technical error I could detect -- a use of "like" where "as" was correct -- and that's so common that I'm virtually the only critic who notices it these days. On the whole, very well done, but with a caution: you could not have prolonged the story beyond where you concluded it without grievously trying the reader's patience. Whether by luck or through innate understanding, you stopped before that point. Beware of the temptation to extend such a tale into the longer forms!

For your further development, I recommend that you study two stories: Ursula Leguin's "The Direction Of The Road," and James Tiptree's "Love Is The Plan The Plan Is Death." Both are highly regarded SF stories; they should be available in anthologies you can borrow from your local library. If you can't find them, drop me a note and I'll see what I can do.
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