Author of numerous books, White Feather has been writing stories for a few decades. He currently lives on the Great Plains of Turtle Island.
on July 09, 2013 :
This one is a tough one for me to rate because I really like the premise, yet it feels underdeveloped. The imagination on display here is first-rate; the writing, however, needs to slow down. It's the old adage of show, don't tell. There's an awful lot of telling in this story. It needs to slow down and go into detail--What are the names of the gods? How do they look? Still, I really appreciate the imagination.
(review of free book)