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on July 11, 2012 :
I read three of your stories and probably liked this one best although I thought all of them could do with some work. The ones in the erotica category aren't quite explicit enough to be erotica - you need a bit more than just saying your characters are having sex in public (Sleeping With the Beauty), if you look around at other erotic writing you'll see they go into quite a lot of detail. (I sympathise as when I first wrote my novels I thought they were very naughty but now I realise they're romance rather than erotica.)
I feel as if there are some spunky characters in here (do I detect a Terry Pratchett influence?) with places to go and adventures (and sex) to have but that they (or you) are a bit shy yet and haven't dared come quite far enough out to reveal all the details of their stories.
(review of free book)