Strip Tease Fantasy - Romance Short Story

Rated 4.25/5 based on 4 reviews
Cindy Miller is a conservative business executive by day with a secret after five fantasy that she wants to pursue. Her husband tells her to get the idea out of her head and that no one will give her a second look.

She has been going to amateur strip night but wants to take her fantasy to the next level with a man that will totally fulfill it. She meets Andre one night and wants him to be the one
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About Marion Francis

I am a short story and novella writer. All my stories are original fiction.

My characters are derived from my readers character requests, people watching, worldwide business travel, vacation, magazines, and pure imagination.

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Tom Odyssey reviewed on June 23, 2017

The first thing that caught my attention, as is often the case, is the cover image. When it comes to romance, I have a particular affinity for the color red (it features prominently in my own work). The cover image does an excellent job representing the nature of the story, and the one word I would use to describe that is _sexy._ It simmers from the beginning to the end, and that's one of the things I appreciate most about this story: it doesn't waste any time doddling before getting to full speed.

Despite the positive things I have to say about it, there is a real reason I had to knock one star off of my review, and that is because of the grammar and punctuation. There's no getting around it—numerous mistakes lurk within these pages. Normally, I would look the other way when it comes to stuff like this, but when the problem is this apparent, it becomes very obvious that some effort is lacking.

Nevertheless, as a whole, this story is quite good. Clearly, a lot of effort was put into the actual content, but I can't emphasize it enough—attention to detail is absolutely critical. Everything from content to formatting to spelling, punctuation, and grammar all weigh heavily when it comes to a story's quality. It's the little things that make a book, and if correcting the mechanical mistakes in this story is what it would take to make it shine, I would be willing to go through it personally just to make that happen.
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Jo Carney reviewed on Sep. 19, 2014

I really liked it!! Nice work.
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extasymaria reviewed on Nov. 2, 2010

good ebook
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Harry Heyoka reviewed on March 17, 2010

With credible characters and good pacing and plot development, this short story kept me interested despite a few typos and punctuation errors. 3 thumbs up!
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