On the Great Wall of Texas

Rated 4.25/5 based on 8 reviews
In 2045 a sergeant shows a young draftee the ropes of guarding the Mexican border, explaining how the Wall came to be built and why they are there.

This is a short-short story, for general audiences, set very early in Harry Heyoka's all-too-plausible Spiral's Realms future history.
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About Harry Heyoka

"The job of the writer is to kiss no ass, no matter how big and holy and white and tempting and powerful." -- Ken Kesey

The biggest, holiest ass in SF is the galactic empire, sometimes called (for good reasons) its most ridiculous idea ever. Contrary Harry wondered what innovations might make a real galactic empire possible, and so created his Spiral's Realms future history; but is "possible" desirable?

"Dismissing SF as serious literature is a dangerous mistake," Harry writes. "It's the only genre consistently prodding folks to look farther down the road to the future. We need that, if we're to have a future."

A refugee from rampant deforestation, Harry Heyoka has spent his adult life in Hawaii, Europe, and North America. Though mute, he is literate in several languages and holds a BS in BS. He loves raw foods and craft ales, and lives with "his" cat outside Helen Gone, Oregon.

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Reviews of On the Great Wall of Texas by Harry Heyoka

Stephen Brandon reviewed on May 6, 2014

Very interesting twist on 'Global Warming". Also an (in the best British style) unusual twist on border security. Short but well written.
(reviewed 3 days after purchase)
Lazo reviewed on April 22, 2012
(no rating)
Well tought out, makes a point and makes you think further about it, I liked it.
(reviewed 40 days after purchase)
David Young reviewed on Jan. 28, 2012

This short story is basically perfect for what it is. I personally enjoy a really concise short story with a PUNCH at the end. This one delivers a masterful punch.
(reviewed 3 years after purchase)
Giri Vijayakumar reviewed on Aug. 12, 2011

Harry Heyoka's On the Great Wall of Texas is an interesting future fiction short. I liked the concise story and the logical buildup towards the ending. Good luck to Harry.
(reviewed the day of purchase)
Eric Johnson reviewed on July 13, 2010

Short and sweet. I liked it!
(review of free book)
David J. Lovato reviewed on March 30, 2010

An eerie, somewhat unsettling look at a possible future; one that puts politics aside in favor of fiction, merely asking "what if?" rather than jamming ideas down the reader's throat. My only complaint is that the first-person narrator seems to be too omniscient, even making what felt like an unneeded reference to the age of a character he's just met; the story feels like it would work a bit better from a third-person perspective. Still, the story itself is a good one, very concise and very possible, which is what makes it so intriguing.
(review of free book)
H Joe Tabor reviewed on March 6, 2010

Harry Heyoka may be a relatively new sci-fi author, but the Great Wall of Texas is great stuff. The story has a small amount of future technology(a vehicle), but has a big political message (as most science fictions do). If all of his stories are like this one, they will all lead up to a sensible, logical, but surprising ending.
(review of free book)
Mark Jacobs reviewed on Dec. 5, 2009

Not exactly my politics; actually the polar opposite. But that's not the point. Our objectives as authors (artists) is to make people think! And this does not disappoint.
(review of free book)
Maria E. Schneider reviewed on Sep. 12, 2009

This is a very well-written, political irony piece. I admit, it grabbed my attention--which side of the issue...there's some...let's call it global warming thrown in for good measure. I imagine it was written to make people think a bit--It resonates. But if you don't like polarizing issues, this may not be for you.

Cleverly done piece.
(review of free book)
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