I am a 58 year old businessman sho lives in northern Florida. I work a lot of hours a week and try to squeeze in time to write every week.
Writing is therapy for me, helping me to clear my mind of these thoughts that overpower me. I do not write for money but for enjoyment. I am not trained nor do I intend to become trained but I have has some positive reviews so I thought I would give this a try.- If you would like to send me a message email me at firstname.lastname@example.org
on July 30, 2012 :
Not a bad story, certainly is hot enough, but the grammatical errors are distracting and it takes away from the scene. The author does note that he's writing this for therapy and isn't correcting the errors so, if you can live with the errors, then go ahead. For me, nah....not when I read that he shoved one two three finders up her and she was moaned. And commas are a rarity so the sentences have to be re-read to really understand them fully. More of a "huh?" than an "ooh" story for me.
(review of free book)