Hi!I'm Rachel and I'm an aspiring writer. I came to Smashwords to see if I could publish my stories.I currently have two novels called The Wrong House and You're My Daydream. I hope you enjoy my stories!
on Nov. 05, 2012 :
The dialogue in this story is kind of juvenile. There is a lot going on and the transitions are jumpy, not blending as smoothly as you would expect. The story line itself is interesting and imaginative. I think it would appeal to a younger age group but not necessarily as a children's story. Therefore, this should be reclassified as a teen/young adult read.
(review of free book)