on Sep. 27, 2013 :
Exceptionally well written. For a succinct piece of flash fiction, it certainly seems to tell a much longer, darker, grislier history. I am reading this in advance of the second story in this "It" series which also grabbed my attention. My only word of advice on this story is to follow the Smashwords style guide. This is a five star story, no doubt. But it wont make it into the premium category without the initial copyright agreement being attached.
(review of free book)