The Date: An Erotic Short Story

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A date is more than it seems. Two geeky kids in a car play a dangerous game.

Warning: consensual non-consent roleplaying. More

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Published: Dec. 10, 2012
Words: 5,130
Language: English
ISBN: 9781301168729
About Jack Stratton

Jack Stratton is writer and hedonist who is currently on a mad libertine world tour. He’s been writing about sex in one form or another for about two decades. He has about a hundred stories, fiction and non-fiction, on his website writingdirty.com and 12 books on amazon and smashwords.com.

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Reviews

Review by: C.L. Knight on Dec. 16, 2012 : star
For me, this was more disturbing than erotic. The author went to great pains to spell out that the encounter between Jack and Stacy was explicitly consensual - which I'm sure he felt he HAD to do, but the continual reminders were repetitive, and left me wondering whether the protagonist was trying to convince the reader or himself that he was not doing anything 'wrong'.

And even as a consensual act, the fact that Stacy wants to be treated in this way is deeply troubling (to me anyway). This smacks of a very male fantasy, which is fine...in theory, but I do worry about the portrayal of female sexuality in the story. I'm not saying that women don't have rape fantasies, I'm just not comfortable with the execution of this one.

Although there were several mentions (again this got a little repetitive), by our male protagonist narrator, of not having done anything like this before and it not even being a fantasy he'd harbored, to me, he was not at all likeable. Not a redeeming feature in sight.

A kiss and a cuddle at the end of all that violence doesn't make either of the characters sympathetic.
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Review by: Brad Westfield on Dec. 12, 2012 : star star star
Don't know if I 'enjoyed' it as Sophia says it 'takes all types' but as with the whole 50 shades crap I question where some people's fantasies are taking us all.
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Review by: hrhsophia on Dec. 11, 2012 : star star star
I guess it takes all types as long as it was consensual.
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