I hate this short story for a few reasons. At first, I thought that the author had a cool concept for a romance story, if somewhat awkwardly written. However, the story does not have a happy ending, so it is not a romance. It is just a story with romantic elements. Also, when the couple starts making out, the guy does not wait for the lady to respond okay before he takes her virginity! She was being able indecisive, and he took her choice away from her! He
is such a jerk, and the woman should have been mad at him.
Finally, the main reason why I hate this book is because the writer gives very false, very ignorant statements about birth control. She says that the Morning After pill causes abortion, which is not true. It prevents conception. It takes approximately 3 days after the sex act for the sperm to travel to the egg, and the morning after pill prevents the sperm from reaching any egg that might be there in the uterus. The author's ignorant statement might deter an unknowledgeable reader from using the morning after pill if she ever needs it. The writer should learn more about contraception before making such ignorant statements.
(reviewed 4 months after purchase)