on Dec. 28, 2012 :
I don't particularly like giving bad reviews, butb if no-one tells you your faults, then how can you improve.
This story says that the writer has a tale to tell about a werewolf but hasn't got the skills required to tell it. Bad grammar, punctuation, etc can often be excused, but not to this extent. It sounds like it has been written by someone either unamiliar with writing, or unfamiliar with the English language. To improve your writing, either [simply] read more, or don't try and write in a language that you don't know.
Perhaps try and grow your story; it is rushed; take each sentence you have written and turn it into three sentences. Put some flesh on its bare bone, and give it a bit of life. Only two stars, but do keep writing.
(review of free book)