The Gold Watch

Rated 2.50/5 based on 2 reviews
Karen thought she was lucky when she found the perfect gift for her boyfriend Mark...a gold watch. Soon Karen learns the frightening truth - every past owner has been killed. Now Karen must race agains time to end the curse forever. Will Karen be the latest victim of The Gold Watch? More
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Price: Free! USD

Words: 7,390
Language: English
ISBN: 9781301585595
About Christina Neely

Christina first discovered her love for writing and reading in middle school. She wrote several short stories for the enjoyment of her friends and family. After receiving a bachelor’s degree from Robert Morris University, she began a career in writing. Christina currenly resides near Youngstown with her sister, Stephanie, and her dogs and cats.

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Review by: Lisa Theiner on Feb. 09, 2013 :
I think this book has potential but at the moment I found the writing a little flat and she does need an editor.

I think if the writing was a little more descriptive and the dialogue was a little more fun and followed better, I would not have been so annoyed with the few grammar mistakes I noticed.

I gave it one star for the idea of the story and another star for the section when they went to the shop and got the watch. That's when (for me the story started to pick up)
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Review by: Paul Rawlins on Jan. 31, 2013 :
I hate to say negative things about people's work, but this story is in serious need of copy editing before it can be reviewed. It contains numerous structural, grammatical and spelling errors. As such it was hard to read which means understanding the story is next to impossible. It's odd since the extended description doesn't have any of these problems. Perhaps a new version could be uploaded soon that fixes these problems.
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