So far this has been awesome, I have enjoyed reading it, however The GD word really isn’t necessary. I mean use the F word or something. I understand not everyone has faith in God or believes in him but when writing something to catch the public’s eye at least think of it both ways. Just respect the issue. I love to read but when I was reading this chapter I was just going along and then before I knew it I was forced to read this word. Now I’m unsure of the rest of the book containing this which makes me not want to continue. In the same gesture you’re a great writer and I would like to know the rest of the story. I’m not criticizing I just know if I feel this way a lot of other people do to.
Thank you for the opportunity to give feedback. Also if you could reassure I won’t see that word again I would like to continue the book.
(review of free book)