Ownership is Fatal

Rated 4.00/5 based on 5 reviews
When 14 year old Sharon hears a noise under her bed, she experiences a night that is unforgettable.
A story by an 11 year old Sarah Maloney.
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  • Category: Fiction » Horror » Ghost
  • Words: 810
  • Language: English
  • ISBN: 9781301958030
Tags: horror short
About Sarah Maloney

I am a girl and I love to write. I guess that much is obvious. Writing takes me away to my imagination and that's why I do it. Although my experience as a writer is not very extensive, I hope you enjoy my stories just the same. Please review the stories you read, I do take criticism into account!

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Review by: Sophie Law on Sep. 30, 2013 :
Amazing work Sarah, don't stop writing!
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Review by: Jonathan Antony Strickland on Feb. 17, 2013 :
A rather nifty little piece of flash horror. Very enjoyable with a nasty little ending to finnish it off....Good stuff indeed.
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Review by: Chuck Grossart on Feb. 7, 2013 :
Keep writing, young lady!
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Review by: Graeme Dent on Feb. 6, 2013 :
I'd second what the last reviewer wrote _ I simply wanted more from the narrator. Regardless, as my only complaint is that I wanted more then it really must have been good. Some striking imigary and a nice short story. I hope there is more to come.
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Review by: Kevin A. Lyons on Feb. 6, 2013 :
A very nice, very short story! There's some good imagery here, nice description, and good attention to detail.

My only (mild) complaint is that the ending is a bit abrupt. I'd like to hear the narrator express what the ending *means* to her.

But this story is a very promising beginning. I look forward to more.
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