on March 13, 2013 :
The ideas in this story are good but I do agree with Mr. Jackson, a good editing would have made this a great story. (You might want to check the spelling of the title.)Keep writing, your ideas are good.
(review of free book)
on Feb. 14, 2013 :
I liked the title. The story reads like a great multiplication of words. It needs to be edited and formatted. There are great blank spaces at the start of each chapter.