“Shut up and listen closely. You are to pickup a togo lunch order at the café on the corner outside of your building. Order the blue plate special no gravy. Move your ass now!" Jim couldn't believe his day has started out with a disburbing phone call that would send him on a race for his life...
It is important to put in your copyright at the beginning of the book. It also important not to put your cover in the book. After saying that I found this a very good story. Yes, the end seemed rushed and a bit of a let down but a rewrite will fix it.
The beginning and the middle of the story was fine but the ending was very disappointing. It was like you are taking a jet ride and then the jet makes a crash landing and then you are forced to take a passenger train to “Boring Ville”.
This story started off strong and kept going at a nice pace. The ending was certainly interesting but I felt like it was a bit of a cop out. I don't think that the ending was as realistic as the rest of the story and I felt like it made the story rushed. Otherwise, it was a pretty good read.