S T O L E N - Suspense Short Story

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“Shut up and listen closely. You are to pickup a togo lunch order at the café on the corner outside of your building. Order the blue plate special no gravy. Move your ass now!" Jim couldn't believe his day has started out with a disburbing phone call that would send him on a race for his life...
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Published: July 20, 2009
Words: 1,580
Language: English
ISBN: 9781452329802
About Marion Francis

I am a short story and novella writer. All my stories are original fiction.

My characters are derived from my readers character requests, people watching, worldwide business travel, vacation, magazines, and pure imagination.

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Review by: Lorna Smith on March 22, 2014 : star star star star
It is important to put in your copyright at the beginning of the book. It also important not to put your cover in the book. After saying that I found this a very good story. Yes, the end seemed rushed and a bit of a let down but a rewrite will fix it.
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Review by: Victor Luba on Feb. 27, 2014 : star star
The beginning and the middle of the story was fine but the ending was very disappointing. It was like you are taking a jet ride and then the jet makes a crash landing and then you are forced to take a passenger train to “Boring Ville”.
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Review by: A.E. Moseley on Nov. 22, 2012 : star star star
This story started off strong and kept going at a nice pace. The ending was certainly interesting but I felt like it was a bit of a cop out. I don't think that the ending was as realistic as the rest of the story and I felt like it made the story rushed. Otherwise, it was a pretty good read.
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Review by: Eloise Tavares on Jan. 09, 2012 : star star star
what a twist
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Review by: Ben Kalcher on Sep. 14, 2011 : star star star star
Not a bad read, noticed a few errors, but liked the ending.
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Review by: gotmud on July 11, 2011 : star star star star star
THIS WAS A GREAT BOOK TO READ. HAD ME FROM THE START.LOVE THE STORY LINE. WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE FROM THIS AUTHOR. KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP.
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Review by: gotmud on July 11, 2011 : star star star star star
THIS WAS A GREAT BOOK TO READ. HAD ME FROM THE START.LOVE THE STORY LINE. WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE FROM THIS AUTHOR. KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP.
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Review by: Joey Jones on May 25, 2011 : star star star star
Not bad but I guessed the ending. I'm pretty smart though.
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Review by: Lynn on Jan. 31, 2010 : star star star star
Supense with a different ending than I expected
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