my rasogulla

Rated 3.67/5 based on 6 reviews
the story revolves around the two characters vikal and vrinda who try to find out few unanswered facts, the two lovers left behind.
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  • Category: Screenplays » Short
  • Words: 2,850
  • Language: English

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Review by: Shreya Goswami on May 18, 2013 :
Atleast death united them! Classic love story.. Adopting the technique of screenplay works.. just next time remember to get your book edited properly before publishing..All the best.
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Review by: Kalpana Sharma on April 10, 2013 :
This is the first book that i have read on smashwords and i have to review this..
The screenplay was very well written and it had a good emotional chord that kept me connected with the characters.
Since you have used a few Hindi words including the title so i believe it won't appeal to many readers.
The suspense element was there and you did a good job.
The reason of not giving full stars is the formatting. The beginning suggests that you have written this for some special person in your life.
Good Work!!
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Review by: Brendon Lewis on April 9, 2013 :
A little tale that had the potential but due to poor editing and low didn't kept me engaged throughout. Although it has a fair ending!
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Review by: Jim Anderson on March 24, 2013 :
Somebody recommended this book to me. I wasn't excited to read it but once i started reading, i was thinking solving the mystery. A very nicely written story. I really liked it. The only problem is the way you have formatted the book. Go through it and reload a fresh version.
Happily recommended!!
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Review by: Erick McCormick on March 20, 2013 :
It surely would had been a great love story but use of some local vocabulary was problematic. Even the title was unusual, later i knew its a sweet. Still, an interesting read with a good plot.
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Review by: CA Mayank Nailwal on March 13, 2013 :
Liked it in parts..
Beginning was promising..esp."MISHTHI ZINDAGI" i.e."SUGARY LIFE"
bt the ending looked a little rushed..! I wished the editing was properly done.
Overall, i know shashanki, you will deliver something wonderful soon. Commendable work!!
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