Take Control - Erotica Romance Short Story

Adult Erotica
Rated 1.75/5 based on 8 reviews
You must be 18 years of age to read the contents. Austin is just dropping by his favorite bar for a little happy hour snack and cocktails before going to a friends party in SOHO. Karen has been feeling horny all day and in the mood for some good extra naughty sex and came prepared just for that. They both are like magnet and steel when they meet.
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  • Category: Fiction » Erotica » Couples Erotica
  • Erotica themes: Unknown
  • Words: 6,150
  • Language: English
  • ISBN: 9781452349442
About Marion Francis

I am a short story and novella writer. All my stories are original fiction.

My characters are derived from my readers character requests, people watching, worldwide business travel, vacation, magazines, and pure imagination.


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Shantella Bonds reviewed on on Jan. 1, 2014

Good with describing clothes but need more physical descriptions. Pace was too fast. Needed to describe sexual acts more to create tension and to make more stimulating. Too much unnecessay dialogue especially in the beginning.
Most of dialogue seemed unnatural which made it unsexy. Could be a much better story if there were more details.
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Francis Haley reviewed on on Nov. 29, 2013

Poor dialogue, some spelling mistakes, and a very disjointed story...
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Cae reviewed on on May 26, 2012

Title: Take Control – Erotica Romance Short Story
Author: Marion Francis
Rating: 1/5

Summary: Austin meets Karen. There is sex. There is bad dialogue. That’s all.

Review: Adult book. Adult review. Thank goodness this is a free book, or I would be crying at the waste of money spent on this fifteen minute, horrible story. I actually finished it, but couldn’t find the effort or the interest to give it anything higher than one star. The lines in this one are absolutely horrid, prime example is this little gem here:
"Austin, I want to leave now. I want you inside of me melting your hot stick of love between my legs" and then there is this one here: "Yes baby release all that warm juice in me now"

This book seriously is nothing more than Kindle smut, and bad smut at that, and very rarely do I stumble across something THIS bad that I couldn’t even take anything pleasurable away from it – aside from the ache in my sides from the laughter at some of those lines. I recommend this for a good laugh but not for that surge of pleasure from an erotic story.

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SM Johnson reviewed on on Dec. 23, 2011

Not very creative, so it didn't work for me, but guys might like it.
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Doris Holmes reviewed on on Sep. 13, 2011

It is all about the sex, sex, sex.
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Kelly reviewed on on Oct. 25, 2010

I would classify it as Men's Erotica - there's really no romance at all, just a whole lot of sex. There's nothing bad with that, per se, but as a woman, the whole situation just seemed unbelievable. This is a story about a woman who is exactly what he wants. There were a few typos. I did have a hard time getting past the urban language - the club was slammin', tipping the bouncer a 10-spot, etc.

That said, it's not a bad story. There could be more character development, sure, but it's a short story and something has to be sacrificed. If you're looking for a quick read and some hot action, this might be the book for you.
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T. S. Presley reviewed on on Sep. 27, 2010

I agree with Slayermel when he says things ended abruptly. There were a few errors. The story was a very interesting in how it played out well. I think you could have fleshed out the characters a little more to give us a little more. Other than it was a fast read.
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Slayermel reviewed on on Jan. 17, 2010

This is the story of a business man named Austin who meets Karen at the bar, and things move very fast towards them hooking up and leaving the bar in Austin’s Limo. Things get very hot, very quick on the way to the Party at Austin’s friends house. Karen was prepared for a dirty night out on the town, and has a few surprises of her own.

I would have enjoyed a little more story, as things moved forward so quickly and then ended very abruptly. Some of the spelling and Grammatical errors ruined the story for me as I would lose the flow while reading.
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