No Trespassing !

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Delbert Thompson lived all by himself on a farm deep in the country and never bothered anyone until a group of teen’s car broke down about a half mile down the road from Delbert’s farm. The teens were only looking to use Delbert’s phone to get help, but Delbert was in no mood for company, so the teens picked the wrong door to knock on for help. More

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Words: 1,170
Language: English
ISBN: 9781301862146
About Drac Von Stoller

Drac Von Stoller reached his goal of over 1 Million downloads of his short stories on September 26, 2016 with (1,000,145) downloads!

Drac Von Stoller finished 9 Short Films that will be out September 30, 2016 on Amazon Video Direct with titles "Bloody Mary," "The Babysitter and the Man Upstairs," "The Haunted Mirror," "The Doll," "The Clown Statue," "The Zombie Bride," "The Vanishing Hitchhiker" starring Clint Eastwood's daughter Kimber Lynn, "No More Mr. Nice Guy." and "Dracula:The Legend Lives."

Drac Von Stoller has 61 short stories in the Top 25 Ghost on iTunes in the US with Bloody Mary at Number 1 followed by 60 others in the Top 25 . My Number 1 story "Bloody Mary" has been hanging in the #1-2 spot in the US. going on two years solid and "Bloody Mary" brought in a record 4,206 downloads in one day on January 29,2016 on iTunes. Drac has increased his number of short stories climbing to the Number 1 spot on iTunes to 45. Bloody Mary was my first short story to be adapted into a short film that is part of my "New" TV/Cable series pilot that I am pitching to many companies so I can finally have my short films seen all over the world soon. Drac Von Stoller will reach his goal of 1 Million downloads by the end of September 2016. Visit iTunes, Amazon, Google Play & Books, Barnes & Noble.

Drac Von Stoller just soared on the iTunes Top Selling Ghost charts on January 29, 2016 with 4,506 downloads which 4,200 came from my #1 story in the US and other countries "Bloody Mary." Total downloads from all retailers combined was 5,319.

Great year for Drac Von Stoller in 2015. Drac Von Stoller's Retailers brought in 383,618 downloads which is an increase of 165,489 downloads from the previous year in 2014.
Google Play & Books came in first place with 212,738 downloads
iTunes came in second with 97,424 downloads
Amazon came in third place with 35,879 downloads
Barnes & Noble came in fourth place with 17,733 downloads
Smashwords came in fifth place with 17,109 downloads.

Drac Von Stoller has had 180 of his short stories in the Top Selling on Google Books & Play and now in the Top Selling in 32 Categories.

Drac Von Stoller has sold 2,115 Audio Books to date.

Laura Miller from the award-winning Salon News and Entertainment Media web site with 17.5 million monthly visitors Interviewed Drac Von Stoller on Wednesday August 13, 2014. Link below for interview.
http://www.salon.com/2014/08/17/portrait_of_a_self_published_author_drac_von_stollers_invisible_literary_empire/

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Reviews

Review by: David Blake on April 21, 2013 :
After a period of absence, Drac Von Stoller has returned with a new collection of horror stories. His previous works have been critiqued by myself and others in the past, and I really hoped that Von Stoller would have taken some of the advice on board, but unfortunately there's no evidence of it. It's a shame, because the enthusiasm is obviously there. Whilst my previous reviews of Von Stoller's works, all of which have been unfavourable, may give the impression that I have something against him, I hope I've been constructive and given him some pointers as to why his stories are failing. I really really want to see Von Stoller improve and blossom as a writer. I'd like to see him try to tell stories in different styles, and I'd really like him to try and DEMONSTRATE information instead of coming right out and TELLING it. For example, instead of something like:

Bob was married to Linda. They were very happy together but Linda didn't know that Bob had a phobia of cats. When Linda brought a stray cat home with her one day, it freaked Bob out.

Try writing it more along the lines of:

"That you, honey?" Bob called out as he heard the front door opening. He glanced at his watch. "Where've you been? You're late..."
"Sorry dear," he heard Linda's voice call back as he rose from his armchair and made his way out of the lounge to greet her. "I got a little sidetracked. I've brought someone to see you..."
"Eh?" Bob scratched his balding head as he turned into the hall. He looked up and saw Linda's tall slim figure in the doorway, smiling at him. Then he froze as he saw the small furry bundle she was hugging to her.
He felt the blood drain from his face, his short collar seemed to constrict around his throat as he gazed into the malevolent lime eyes of the cat in his wife's arms, staring coldly back at him.
Bob screamed.


As for this particular story, "No Trespassing!", it starts off by mentioning an event, and then goes on to repeat that same information as the event then unfolds. A more effective opening, in my view, would have been to start the action with the teenagers as their car breaks down, they wonder where they can get assistance, see the farmhouse, head for it, begin to feel uncomfortable as the house just doesn't feel quite right, then they knock and meet Delbert Thompson and begin to feel even more afraid, then the shock - he shoots them dead, in cold blood.
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