No Trespassing !

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Delbert Thompson lived all by himself on a farm deep in the country and never bothered anyone until a group of teen’s car broke down about a half mile down the road from Delbert’s farm. The teens were only looking to use Delbert’s phone to get help, but Delbert was in no mood for company, so the teens picked the wrong door to knock on for help. More
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About Drac Von Stoller

Drac Von Stoller presents "Horrifying Tales From The Dead" 9 Vignettes of Horror You Never Expected on one DVD – Will Keep You Up at Night… COMING SOON!

Drac Von Stoller's audio book "35 Tales of Terror from the Vault," was Number 1 on Audible in Sci-Fi & Fantasy, Short Stories & Anthologies 3-6 hours in the US. 8/17/17

Drac Von Stoller's short story "Bloody Mary"​ has been Number "1"​ for over 6 months solid in the US and Number 1 in 26 Countries over the course of two years and also has had 48 reach #1 on iBooks.

Drac Von Stoller's total downloads to date are 1,544,245. Also, Drac Von Stoller released 9 short films on Amazon Video on September 30, 2016.Drac Von Stoller also signed a Worldwide distribution deal for his film project for 2017 in December 2016 with Jeeters and Deuters who also signed a deal to distribute all of their videos including Drac Von Stoller's. 

Drac Von Stoller reached his goal of over 1 Million downloads of his short stories on September 26, 2016 with (1,000,145) downloads!

Drac Von Stoller finished 9 Short Films that will be out September 30, 2016 on Amazon Video Direct with titles "Bloody Mary," "The Babysitter and the Man Upstairs," "The Haunted Mirror," "The Doll," "The Clown Statue," "The Zombie Bride," "The Vanishing Hitchhiker" starring Clint Eastwood's daughter Kimber Lynn, "No More Mr. Nice Guy." and "Dracula:The Legend Lives."

Amazon Video Direct Links to Drac Von Stoller Films- September 30, 2016

The Babysitter and the Man Upstairs- www.amazon.com/dp/B01LP2HXNS
Zombie Bride - www.amazon.com/dp/B01LP1WJ56
The Vanishing Hitchhiker- www.amazon.com/dp/B01LG7EXXU
Dracula: The Legend Lives- www.amazon.com/dp/B01M125L2P
The Clown- www.amazon.com/dp/B01LP52A10
Bloody Mary- www.amazon.com/dp/B01LRK01SC
No More Mr. Nice Guy- www.amazon.com/dp/B01LW8WTGW
The Haunted Mirror- www.amazon.com/dp/B01LRKC4PU
The Doll- https://www.amazon.com/dp/B01LRKYIYA

Drac Von Stoller had a record day on May 26, 2017 on Google Play & Books with 3,562 downloads of his short stories.

Drac Von Stoller has had 180 of his short stories in the Top Selling on Google Books & Play and now in the Top Selling in 32 Categories.

Drac Von Stoller has sold 2,897 Audio Books to date.

Laura Miller from the award-winning Salon News and Entertainment Media web site with 17.5 million monthly visitors Interviewed Drac Von Stoller on Wednesday August 13, 2014. Link below for interview.
http://www.salon.com/2014/08/17/portrait_of_a_self_published_author_drac_von_stollers_invisible_literary_empire/

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Also in Series: 31 Horrifying Tales from the Dead Volume 4

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Reviews

Review by: David Blake on April 21, 2013 :
After a period of absence, Drac Von Stoller has returned with a new collection of horror stories. His previous works have been critiqued by myself and others in the past, and I really hoped that Von Stoller would have taken some of the advice on board, but unfortunately there's no evidence of it. It's a shame, because the enthusiasm is obviously there. Whilst my previous reviews of Von Stoller's works, all of which have been unfavourable, may give the impression that I have something against him, I hope I've been constructive and given him some pointers as to why his stories are failing. I really really want to see Von Stoller improve and blossom as a writer. I'd like to see him try to tell stories in different styles, and I'd really like him to try and DEMONSTRATE information instead of coming right out and TELLING it. For example, instead of something like:

Bob was married to Linda. They were very happy together but Linda didn't know that Bob had a phobia of cats. When Linda brought a stray cat home with her one day, it freaked Bob out.

Try writing it more along the lines of:

"That you, honey?" Bob called out as he heard the front door opening. He glanced at his watch. "Where've you been? You're late..."
"Sorry dear," he heard Linda's voice call back as he rose from his armchair and made his way out of the lounge to greet her. "I got a little sidetracked. I've brought someone to see you..."
"Eh?" Bob scratched his balding head as he turned into the hall. He looked up and saw Linda's tall slim figure in the doorway, smiling at him. Then he froze as he saw the small furry bundle she was hugging to her.
He felt the blood drain from his face, his short collar seemed to constrict around his throat as he gazed into the malevolent lime eyes of the cat in his wife's arms, staring coldly back at him.
Bob screamed.


As for this particular story, "No Trespassing!", it starts off by mentioning an event, and then goes on to repeat that same information as the event then unfolds. A more effective opening, in my view, would have been to start the action with the teenagers as their car breaks down, they wonder where they can get assistance, see the farmhouse, head for it, begin to feel uncomfortable as the house just doesn't feel quite right, then they knock and meet Delbert Thompson and begin to feel even more afraid, then the shock - he shoots them dead, in cold blood.
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