The Teacher Syndrome

Rated 2.50/5 based on 4 reviews
A very brief story about Adriana and her heartbreak.
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About Aaralyn Griffin

Hi! First of all, the Quotes book I uploaded when I was 15 years old and I have no idea where the surge in popularity came from.
Secondly, if you're here to check me out, read "Kyralie" pt 1! I'm trying to get more reviews to get a feel for if I should post more for free.

Anyways, heya, I'm Aaralyn. I like pie, horror movies, and pretty people. Big city heart transplanted to a small town.
Currently 21 years old, and not writing as much as I'd like because of my Legal Classes.

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Review by: David Blake on June 2, 2013 :
I have to agree with the other reviewers. This story was too much like a first draft that the author hadn't even read through; there were flashes of good writing but lots of errors - words missed out and so forth.
The story itself hints at an illicit affair but needs tightening up as it's a bit too ambiguous and confusing, such as how the teacher's brother comes to be involved. I mean, yes, I can come up with a theory or two, but it's pure guesswork rather than piecing together clues from the narrative. Given how everything else is told by suggestion, it's also a bit clumsy that the text has to explain that Collin is Mr Arturo's brother the moment he is introduced. So, a score of 2 from me, but with better editing this could have been a 4.
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Review by: I M Vayne on May 13, 2013 :
Don't want to discourage the author from continuing to write, but you really need to rewrite and proofread your stories before posting. I agree with the other reviewer that your story has potential. Still, along with the technical faults the characters just weren't developed enough. The way you get better is to keep writing, which I hope you will.
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Review by: hrhsophia on April 9, 2013 :
I read through twice but I am still a bit confused and without spoiling it for others I will say that it has potential.
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Review by: Steph Anne on April 9, 2013 :
Good. Short but that's known upfront in the description. Noticed a few missed edits but that didn't take away from the story. Just enough to intrigue and would be interested in reading more about this character.
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