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on May 24, 2013 :
Littered with typos, and pretty expensive for just 15pages... Suggest you at least double the length, develop the characters more.
(reviewed 30 days after purchase)
on May 22, 2013 :
Great concept for a story. Loved the premise. The payoff was less than satisfactory, and it suffers from a definite lack of character development. Enjoyable, but somehow lacking.
(reviewed 25 days after purchase)