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on Dec. 29, 2013 :
Laura Knots editing is usually rough and this is no exception, e.g., "past" instead of "passed" and it looks like there was a late change from 3rd person to 1st person, so there's a mix of "my" [body part] and "her" [body part] which can get confusing. But despite the editing problems, some of her stories work for me because they're so sincerely committed to the kinks and fetishes being explored. This one felt a bit lacking, there wasn't much tension to it. Should really be tagged dubcon or even noncon.
(reviewed 57 days after purchase)