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Annika loves bondage, submission, and humiliation.
on July 31, 2013 :
I must agree with the other reviewer as far as the spelling and sentence structure are concerned. This needs an editor so badly and it’s such a shame too, because the story has some real potential. The readability deserves 1 star but the story is a 3 or 4 when you can fallow it, so I will give it 2 overall. I hope the author reads this and edits the story.
(reviewed long after purchase)
on June 21, 2013 :
While I have enjoyed this author’s previous work I must warn everyone that this book is incredibly slapdash. It appears to have been written using some sort of speech recognition software. The author may have run a spell check but clearly did not even read this prior to offering it for sale. Some of the sentences are nonsensical and some are only understandable once you twig to the how it appears to have been written. If you enjoy the authors work this story is good but come on if you charge for a product at least read it first. If properly edited this could be a good story.
(reviewed the day of purchase)