I can't believe this has 4.5 stars. The writing is HORRIBLE. It was so bad, it actually made me sign up as a member so that I could write this review. The story is full of run on sentences. For example, page 11 has 20 lines and the only period on the page is at the end. I can't even get into the plot, because the writing is so bad, it makes it impossible to understand what the heck is going on. He flies her to Paris and back, kisses her on the cheek and says goodbye, they allude to a few more dates, she runs away and finds out she's pregnant. He finds her, they argue about his wife and kid, and he says "I didn't tell you about them, because I don't tell my life story after just one date."??? Skip this one, folks, seriously.
(review of free book)