Ok I'll preface this by saying erotica isn't usually my thing. There are a lot of typos, and the writing just feels rough and unrefined, and not in a good way.
The first two-thirds is just superfluous plot that doesn't really matter, and drags for a while. The sex is kinda hot, in a cheap porn kinda way. Not so sensual. The main character's arousal is mostly expository, and much of the physical description is redundant.
It's free though.
(review of free book)