Not to bad for a book that is rather incomplete. I take it that your next novel would be more interesting as it should explain the plot and of why your book is entitled 'Criminal Lover'. Seeing that you have only written two books, you may need a little more practice as a writer. To be honest, I've seen worse.. The past review was a little harsh, because your spelling, grammar, fantasy, and characterization wasn't horrid but it wasn't the greatest either. I gave two stars because this is what I believed a real review rating for what your novel should be. I hope you take this and learn from it. Some reviews will not be as helpful as you can see, but just take the good with the bad. I do see where this story is heading so continue writing and study other writers.
I do find it funny because my name is in fact Dennis and one thing for sure, I'm not a misogynist but I can't say the same for 'Harry'.
(review of free book)