Hi. I enjoyed this, but then I'm weird. Atmospheric and flowing well, the story pulls you in. A couple of typos need addressing, like think steak instead of thick steak. And was it meant to be Mars or marks on the fridge? Could have been chocolate, I guess??? A couple of layout issues, but nothing that detracted from the overall enjoyment of the story. I'm betting that by the time the next person reads this book, the tiny issues mentioned above will have been addressed and they'll be wondering what I was on about. Another little tidy up and here is a five star story. For prospective readers of this creepy horror, I recommend you indulging in this "Tasty" offering. Keep going, Mr Bystry. The world deserves to be checking under their beds before they go to sleep and you will have them doing that! Good Job.
(review of free book)
(review of free book)