The White Steed

Rated 3.67/5 based on 3 reviews
A man is carried on a magical journey by a white winged horse to the brink of a historic battle only to end up in an unexpected place.
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Words: 1,480
Language: English
About Marvin Perkins

I am retired from the U.S. Navy since 2003, currently work as a merchant seaman. I write in all types of media,from songs, to poetry, novels as well as short stories.

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Review by: Mike White on Feb. 17, 2017 :
This story worked well enough. I wasn't a huge fan of the ending, but it worked well for what it was. The flight of fancy that the writer created initially was very whimsical.
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Review by: James Jenkins on Feb. 11, 2017 :
The story flow is a bit bumpy, it could be edited to be smoother.

The reality at the end works well.
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Review by: Jonathan Antony Strickland on Aug. 21, 2013 :
I enjoyed this short fantasy story of a guy transported to a strange and wonderful land. The dreamlike quality explored here was my favourite part, as the narrator explains the mysterious, though beatiful world, he finds himself in.

This was good and the twist ending was also done well(though I did kind of guess what was coming, though this is not a complaint as I'm sure the writer wanted the reader to work out the strange jumps from scene to scene).
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