Letting Go

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Words: 590
Language: English
ISBN: 9781301315512
About J Joseph Michaels

We all have disturbing thoughts run through our minds...Others repress and don't acknowledge them, while I choose to nurture them.
Big into anything crypto or paranormal

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Review by: Michael Carter on Aug. 29, 2013 :
Very good writing here, I thought; it creates a strong visual image for the reader. It's a good snapshot as such, but not much of a story, more a piece of writing and it has some pathos to it.

However, even though it is pretty good stuff, it would be much more powerful and have more point if we knew and cared about this character; if this was a section in a longer work, it would have more meaning.

I'm sure many people write things like this, at a certain stage of their lives; a great way for self-therapy, but not always the best thing to share with others. I would have liked it more had it been in a better fictional context. I enjoyed the writing though.
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Review by: Jonathan Antony Strickland on Aug. 19, 2013 :
This was well written flash fiction piece. But I just do not see the point.

I've read a few stories here on smashwords that are about a simular subject (I won't say what as that would spoil it for anybody wanting to read this), and with every story I read like this I'm left wondering if I've perhaps missed something? however, as I've said though, this is a nicely put together piece. Perhaps others will get more from it than I did.
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Review by: David H. Keith on Aug. 18, 2013 :
I get it. I would have preferred a bit more backstory, but I get it. Good job.

David H. Keith
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