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I write erotica for my boyfriend. He thinks it is good enough to publish so I do. Maybe you'll enjoy it too.
Francis W. Porretto
on Jan. 06, 2011 :
First, what I got for my $1.69 wasn't "Dana's Trailer;" it was "Never Too Ugly." The PDF file was named danas_trailer.pdf, but it had the "Never Too Ugly" story in it. I also downloaded the RTF file, and it had the very same problem. You might want to check your upload files.
Second, "Never Too Ugly" is kinky-sweet. There isn't any dramatic tension in it; it's more a "feel-good" story. But it does feel very good indeed. People need to be reminded that most of us are better than we think...and that most of "them" are better than we think, too.
Third, you do have a few minor problems, mostly with homonyms. Choosing the right word from "its" and "it's," or "your" and "you're," for example. If you have a reliable friend, ask him to proofread your stories for you and point out any problems in the grammar or spelling.
On the whole, well done. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it.
All my best,
(reviewed the day of purchase)