I'd like to share some of my work with you all. One of my followers on tumblr suggested posting some things here. Though i have been writing for as long as I can remember i've only recently developed enough courage to actually begin sharing my work. Though I dabble in all genres I am particularly interested in short pieces that portray moments or events that have greatly impacted the life of an individual. My dream is to be able to compile a book of short stories with each story capturing the essence of an event that has shaped, in one way or another, the life of my subjects. Since I am still very new to the whole writing thing I would really appreciate if you all would read my first story and provide me with honest feedback. I don't bruise easily so please be as critical as possible in your reviews. If you hate it i want to know :).
I hope you all enjoy it though please do not hesitate to tell me if you don't.
My tumblr is no longer live but I will leave my original post here up for all to enjoy.