on Oct. 17, 2013 :
What a great story! Loved it. Keep writing Soph :)
(review of free book)
on Sep. 28, 2013 :
Very well done Sophie! I know many full grown college graduates who can't write as well as this. There were a few issues that weren't so much spelling as proper usage (to rather than too, etc.) and the section beginning "I walked through loads of muddy puddles..." would benefit from being broken up into several paragraphs. But the story was well paced and enjoyable. I can't wait to see what you give us as your writing matures.