A solid gang bang tale incorporating some unusual elements: bukkake, watersports, and guys who (somewhat to their surprise) like cream pie action. I enjoy gang bang stories, but they sometimes have of a note of misogyny I really don't like. This one does not. Pauline's boundaries get pushed a little bit, but it's her desire that drives the story, and it's notable that none of the words "slut," "bitch," or "whore" appear. I also liked the gradual introduction and escalation of the watersports elements. And either there were relatively few typos, or I was too involved in the story to notice many of them. I will definitely read more from this author.
(reviewed 49 days after purchase)