Green Eyes

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Sid hated cats. Sid liked to party. When a black cat spoiled his party he got upset. A short short horror story about a man who tried to run over the wrong cat.
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Published: Oct. 29, 2013
Words: 1,650
Language: English
ISBN: 9781310964794
About Rik Hunik

I’m fifty-six years old. I live in Quesnel, BC with my wife Jo and a 17-pound, blue-eyed, white cat named Mister. I mostly build houses and shops to earn a living but I’ve written dozens of fantasy stories, including horror, sword & sorcery, mystery, humor, erotica, and science fiction, frequently combining genres. Twenty-six have been published in small press magazines and e-zines, from the 200-word "The Hole" in Ascent Aspirations, to the 10,000-word novelette "Levels" in Buzzy Mag, published in May, 2012. My high score is four stories to Barbaric Yawp.
I also dabble in art and photography. I build inukshuks and sell them in a local craft shop. I take photographs of them and photoshop them into art prints.
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Review by: Michael Carter on Nov. 07, 2013 : star star star star
Another solid well-written story by Hunik, about a cat-hating guy who gets his just desserts. The author is obviously a cat lover [from his profile], and that would make this a bit of a wrenching story to write. I think, for a little flash fiction, it succeeds really well, and the ending was a moderate surprise to me. Good stuff.

Rik Hunik's work here looks very diverse and interesting, and I will be reading more of his writing soon.
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Review by: Sherry Donacy on Oct. 29, 2013 : star star star star
I am quite impressed with this little tale. The man likes killing cats, the man drops acid, the man starts seeing the cat he just tried to kill all around that evenings party. Witty and poignant although I would be lying if I said I didn't see the end coming early on. Still, the end was well set up so I can't complain. My one critique would be with the first paragraph. The rest of this story is so well written I think I know what the author was trying to do there. He has a rather jumbled run on sentence describing the chaotic feel of this drug fueled bash. For me though, it was confusing and caused me to reread it three times before I drunk it all in (no pun intended, okay maybe a little).
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