The Vampire Across the Hall

Rated 3.25/5 based on 8 reviews
Daisi Malone lives in the Presidio Building in Newtown, Sydney, Australia. The building is mysterious and its residents even more so. There is the couple with lots of children, the Glee Club and the English Backpackers- although not for long. In this, the first story by Daisi Malone, she meets her neighbour, Madden, the Vampire across the hall. More
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  • Category: Fiction » Holiday » Adventure
  • Words: 2,590
  • Language: English
  • ISBN: 9781458181107
About Leann Richards

I am a juggler, a writer, a pretend magician, an historian and a teacher. I've published some books on Australian theatrical history through Ginninderra Books in Australia, and have just finished another on Australian juggling history which will be published in early 2022. Between juggling, researching history and teaching I like to write fairy tales. I live with my imagination in Sydney Australia.

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Reviews of The Vampire Across the Hall by Leann Richards

Cyndi Goodgame reviewed on Feb. 23, 2015

Quick read. Many grammar errors, but story flowed. Didn't twist they way I thought it would. Good ending.
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Robert C. Mason reviewed on June 2, 2012

Original, if not odd
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Julia Averbeck reviewed on Aug. 25, 2011

I really liked the first part of this series. Nice read for inbetween.
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Albert Robbins reviewed on Aug. 8, 2011

Overall Feedback: Overall this was a great introduction to the characters and storyline. This read more like an excerpt than a short story. So it gives the feel of a teaser more than a stand alone short story.

Point of View: You are experiencing the world through the eyes of Daisy and which the author does a stellar job of bringing to life.

Voice: There really is not enough story here to be compelled to read on but you do get interested enough in the storyline to read the second in the series.

Character Development: Again with the length of this short you have batrly the time but with this in mind the Author does give you a small emotional connection with the main character so I would have to say yje author did average in this area.

Plot: Straightforward and to the point. Not a single problem here.

Dialogue: The character dialogue was a little sticky in places but overall I would say the author did a wonderful job at keeping this part of the short interesting and flowing.

Pacing: This is where the size comes into play, you will fly right through the story as the author does not have the space to deter from the track as it were.

Setting: The details in the story give you an exact idea of the place and surroundings of Daisy and you may get goosebumps while reading.

Continuity: Here the author was masterful in leaving it open enough to hook you into the second book but not leaving it so open that you are to confused to continue.
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butterflieslovebooks reviewed on May 10, 2011

This is a lovely little book and it just made me smile.
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thylogale reviewed on Feb. 25, 2011

An interesting start. I liked the characters and the ending made me smile.
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Jackie B reviewed on Feb. 18, 2011

Short, sweet and to the point! An okay intro to the adventures of Daisi which is worth spending the short of amount of time it takes to read... I liked it well enough to say that will read the second half to see what happens next...
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Miriam Smith reviewed on Jan. 14, 2011
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I really enjoyed this book. I kept smiling 'cause it's sweet and amusing.

@Ernest: 155cm is about 61in. So 5'1" I guess.
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Ernest Winchester reviewed on Jan. 14, 2011

It is amusingly different, but I can’t decide if I like it or not. So I’ll give it three stars and move on. Oh, by the way, how tall is 155 cm?
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