Rated 1.00/5 based on 3 reviews
A girl lives in a loving family, but one day everything changes with one word.
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Review by: Paul Swearingen on Jan. 14, 2011 :
Kristina, you show promise as a writer, but what you have written is an outline for a Christian story. It is not a fully-developed novel, or short story - yet. As Angelica suggested in her review, you should develop this story into a full novel. But first - you need to read much more to gain some background in fiction writing. Consider studying published writers like Karen Hesse and others to see how they handle some of the same themes that you did. Good luck, and feel free to contact me here on Smashwords for more suggestions and books to read. I was a teacher for 34 years, and I'd be glad to help you get started.
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Review by: Kumi on Jan. 14, 2011 :
It's a simple story with a beautiful message, I loved the message and the idea of the plot. But it could have been developed much more better and the plot had a lot to give more than just three pages. A little editing needed that's it. God bless you, keep reading keep writing! ;)
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Review by: Ernest Winchester on Jan. 14, 2011 :
This story did not match the description other than it was in English. Didn't like it at all.
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