I really tried to get into this tale, but try as I might I couldn't. There may be something here here, but I was able to find it. I hope the author keeps writing and explores other avenues to express her talent.
Quite an imaginative and entertaining piece. The style can be a bit irritating - readers aren't alwys keen to be spoken to so directly by the protagonist. Nevertheless, this is a clever tale. It requires a better start as the first para isn't overly gripping. I'd give this three and half stars.