A note from Passion:
I realize my writing style is awkward at best, but keep in mind this is written in a form I fondly refer to as "cyberotic". Coming from a cybersex, roleplay type approach, and written in the second person (but not always).
Most persons who engage in cybersex will type directly to the reader (partner) and may indeed type FOR them, in the reader's perspective, thereby allowing the other to find gratification with little or no reply needed... ha, other than a hurriedly placed "mmmm".
These stories are directed towards those who find this style of writing appealing. More actual "meat", less background, less storyline. (Would this be "God-Modding"?) lulz.